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Why Do You Try So Hard? by ~animehamster:iconanimehamster:



Why do you try so hard
To fight for what you believe in?
Why do you try so hard
To continue instead of fin?

Your life will end anyway
So why continue to try?
There's nothing left to believe in
Nothing to do except die

But you still keep fighting sadness
Even though you lost it all
And you still keep going further
Extending even past the wall

You give hope to others
Others with uncurable pain
Pain that will lead to their deaths
A fate that connects to them like a chain

Yet the world keeps on moving
Cause of certain people like you
Who never give up their dreams
No matter what fate happens to do

So why do you try so hard
For the people that you love?
And why do you try so hard
To free yourself like a caged dove?
©2007-2009 ~animehamster
:iconanimehamster:

Author's Comments

finally posted a new poem! :dance: i was finally able to finish it after starting it like two months ago...^^; 2 poems are also in progress so look out for them soon.

EDIT:

Theme # 33. Expectations

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:iconlivechickens:
i like this it is very well written, congrats o finishing it :boogie:

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:iconchirondude:
Wow. Very well written. You've clearly put some time and thought into this and it came out quite nicely. :)

:clap:

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"How many English Literature majors does it take to fix a VCR?"
"I don't know; they're still scrutinizing the manual."


lol, college is fun :D

:iconanimehamster:
yay! :dance: finally someone else besides my friends posted a comment! :hug: thx for the favie and thx for the comment

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Kamikorosu. -bites 69-
:iconanimehamster:
thx very much :hug:

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Kamikorosu. -bites 69-
:icondreaminstories:
very nice! i like the concept and it was well-written too! ^^ :heart:

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Why are the penguins eating Fruit Loops on top of the refrigerator? Again? >.<

Actually, how did they get up there in the first place...?
:iconanimehamster:
thnks for the comments u write! :D

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Kamikorosu. -bites 69-
:icondreaminstories:
my pleasure! :hug:

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Why are the penguins eating Fruit Loops on top of the refrigerator? Again? >.<

Actually, how did they get up there in the first place...?
:iconcherry-flavored-rain:
Ahhhh!
Your rhyming needs of work, my friend.
But overall, I love it!
=D


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:iconcherry-flavored-rain:
huh?
I ment to say your rhyming needs lots of work.
My comment got all skrewy.
lol

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